Saturday, June 15, 2019
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Kia ora Miriama,
ReplyDeleteMark here from the Te Ara Tūhura Cluster in Christchurch, I work supporting teachers and students as part of Manaiakalani Outreach.
I enjoyed watching your introduction video especially your humour about the lack of people viewing your blog.
I read your Taken story and was really impressed with your writing especially the way you scaffolded your paragraphs. Would it be ok if I shared this blogpost with teachers in Christchurch as I think it would help them in their teaching of writing.
Also how have you turned your slide into portrait view, this is something I did not know about?
Keep up the great work and remember do not be shy in sharing your blog with friends and family. Also when you leave a comment on other student blogs invite them to comment on your blog by putting a link to your blog in the comment.
Nga mihi,
Mark
Kia ora Mei (Miriama) I am actually writing this comment on taken having got interested after watching you humorous screencastify looking at your blog. You possibly don't need me to comment as you can do all of it by yourself. This taken story is exciting for sure and I liked the way that we could read it by a series of bullet points. Have you tried commenting on someone else's blog and giving them the link to yours? That might work.
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